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Yoruni by Yoruni Yoruni by Yoruni
My really old OC - refreshed :D

Name:Niya / Yoruni (Both names in use.)
Nicknames: White Night / White Gold
Race: Chaotic God
Height: 154
Powers: She helps her mother in underworld for now
Age: ??
Parents: mother - Hel and unknown father (means - known only to me and maybe 4 people)

Full European God!! She use name Yoruni for enter Asian Dominion where she normally has limited power.
She wasn't born in "cat" form, it's a curse that Freya has thrown at her, but Niya/Yoru never disliked this form so it she kept it - Sometimes she got wings and turns herself to winged cat form to travel.

Anyway - finally finished it _-_" and I have decided to do not make background 'cause I wanted it to look clear... (and 'cause I am lazy *ohohohohoho*)
Now I can take care of trade arts and concept art of one more chara - a fox

I hope You like it...

ok now shower and to work tomorow Q_Q"

Please leave a comment.
kthx <3

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The linework is great, but there are problems with the colors. Firstly, everything in this picture doesn't have shadows. Your 'shadows' aren't dark enough. For example, the blue skirt thing. For the covered part of the skirt, there should be a part which is dark because of top part of the skirt. The shadow color of the skirt should be the color beside the thigh, the color of the insides the skirt. Next, the hands. I don't know if the fingers are meant to be like that but the way it was drawn makes them look like cat claws, and the palm is too big. The part of your hand below the pinky, that part. Another part are the legs. This girl's left thigh, the inner line which joins the skirt, shouldn't curve inwards. The calf of the left leg shouldn't be jutting out if the foot is facing us. If you want to draw the leg facing the other leg, the curves should be much softer, smaller and slower. Yet again, the shading of the legs can be improved. The legs confused me at first because I wasn't sure which leg was in front. There is definitely something wrongly drawn about the legs because both look like they're overlapping the other. But still, this artwork is quite detailed and like I said earlier, the line work is great.
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:iconbladeriver:
Mi to trochę przypomina Damską wersję Inuyashy, ale może być, fajna praca ^^
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Yoruni Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
trochę nie ta rasa - ona jest bogiem,
również nie urodziła się taka...
no i trochę nie ten rejon świata xD
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:iconbladeriver:
No w sumie to tak ^^
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:iconyoruni:
Yoruni Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
zainspirowana Amerykańskimi Bogami - N. Gaimana i starymi dobrymi komiksami Thorgala :3
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:iconbladeriver:
No to dobrze wiedzieć, możesz się spodziewać ode mnie wiadomości, chyba że odpowiada ci skype ? <3
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Yoruni Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
raczej mało na nim przebywam, bo normalnie przeprowadziłam się i nie mam dostępu do internetu na co-dzień, teraz tylko mam ale skype mi muli :X
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:iconbladeriver:
masz skype, mój skype to blade_river. Mam nadzieję, że napiszesz ^^
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AsukaKyubi Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow she is such a beauti *-*
Very good art :3
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:iconyoruni:
Yoruni Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You :hug:
it means a lot ^^
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AsukaKyubi Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome <3
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