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Yoruni by Yoruni Yoruni by Yoruni
My really old OC - refreshed :D

Name:Niya / Yoruni (Both names in use.)
Nicknames: White Night / White Gold
Race: Chaotic God
Height: 154
Powers: She helps her mother in underworld for now
Age: ??
Parents: mother - Hel and unknown father (means - known only to me and maybe 4 people)

Full European God!! She use name Yoruni for enter Asian Dominion where she normally has limited power.
She wasn't born in "cat" form, it's a curse that Freya has thrown at her, but Niya/Yoru never disliked this form so it she kept it - Sometimes she got wings and turns herself to winged cat form to travel.

Anyway - finally finished it _-_" and I have decided to do not make background 'cause I wanted it to look clear... (and 'cause I am lazy *ohohohohoho*)
Now I can take care of trade arts and concept art of one more chara - a fox

I hope You like it...

ok now shower and to work tomorow Q_Q"

Please leave a comment.
kthx <3

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The linework is great, but there are problems with the colors. Firstly, everything in this picture doesn't have shadows. Your 'shadows' aren't dark enough. For example, the blue skirt thing. For the covered part of the skirt, there should be a part which is dark because of top part of the skirt. The shadow color of the skirt should be the color beside the thigh, the color of the insides the skirt. Next, the hands. I don't know if the fingers are meant to be like that but the way it was drawn makes them look like cat claws, and the palm is too big. The part of your hand below the pinky, that part. Another part are the legs. This girl's left thigh, the inner line which joins the skirt, shouldn't curve inwards. The calf of the left leg shouldn't be jutting out if the foot is facing us. If you want to draw the leg facing the other leg, the curves should be much softer, smaller and slower. Yet again, the shading of the legs can be improved. The legs confused me at first because I wasn't sure which leg was in front. There is definitely something wrongly drawn about the legs because both look like they're overlapping the other. But still, this artwork is quite detailed and like I said earlier, the line work is great.
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BladeRiver Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student
Mi to trochę przypomina Damską wersję Inuyashy, ale może być, fajna praca ^^
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
trochę nie ta rasa - ona jest bogiem,
również nie urodziła się taka...
no i trochę nie ten rejon świata xD
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BladeRiver Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student
No w sumie to tak ^^
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
zainspirowana Amerykańskimi Bogami - N. Gaimana i starymi dobrymi komiksami Thorgala :3
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BladeRiver Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student
No to dobrze wiedzieć, możesz się spodziewać ode mnie wiadomości, chyba że odpowiada ci skype ? <3
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
raczej mało na nim przebywam, bo normalnie przeprowadziłam się i nie mam dostępu do internetu na co-dzień, teraz tylko mam ale skype mi muli :X
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BladeRiver Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student
masz skype, mój skype to blade_river. Mam nadzieję, że napiszesz ^^
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AsukaKyubi Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow she is such a beauti *-*
Very good art :3
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You :hug:
it means a lot ^^
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AsukaKyubi Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome <3
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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AsukaKyubi Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Iceliarea Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love her design and the colors there's enough detail on the design without making her overly complicated.
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wanted to show hr style and make it clean not complicated
I am happy You like that idea and thank You for the fav on her ^^
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Iceliarea Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe its my pleasure ^^ I'm collecting artists oc's so I can do fanart of them at some point when I feel better<3
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know that feeling :D
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charlenequek Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohhhh! I know Hel the Goddess. She's the only daughter of Loki! :dummy:
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes :3
but my vision of Niya/Yoruni grandpa changed after I watched Thor and The Avengers (and some fanarts with Loki and cats - I was like "WTH, how did they know about that army of cats?")
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charlenequek Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The Loki I know is from the anime Mantantei Loki Ragnarok. :iconblushplz: I hope we are talking about the same Loki because I am not aware of the cats.
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never watched or read that
Umm...
I am risen on mythology but the titles I was talking about was from Marvel movie adaptation ^^"
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charlenequek Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I knew that. But there is an anime version to it too!
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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Solceress Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
prześliczna jest ! *_* i tak cudnie narysowana <3
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dziękuje :hug:
mam wrażenie, ze ten nos zbyt taki znikomy tylko :<
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Solceress Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no mógłby być mocniej zaznaczony biorąc pod uwagę,że lineart jest tutaj mocno widoczny- ale nie odbiera to wspaniałości tej pracy i nawet mi się nie rzuciło to w oczy,dopóki o tym nie napisałaś :D
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ja tak z początku tez nie zwróciłam uwagi ale jakiś czas po skończeniu i opublikowaniu tak patrze i patrze i coś mi tu nie gra >;0
Ale ciesze się ze mimo to się Tobie podoba :D
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HoboBroccoli Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She is so pretty! I love the way you shaded it :3 Great job!! You have amazing talent :'D
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You, very, very much ^^
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HoboBroccoli Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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TanSugar Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she is so asfjsfkjsl beautiful and so charming :iconilavplz:
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you sweety :iconhappyhappyplz::iconblushplz:
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TanSugar Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome :iconloveloveplz:
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Lylleill Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
śliczna^^
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dziekuje <3
oraz dziekuje za fava ^^
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Lylleill Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ nie ma za co
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WernoZaur Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
prześliczna ;33
podobają mi się jej ciuchy ;D iii włosy
i w ogóle całą mi się podoba ^ ^
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dziękuje Q___________Q
*mocno ściska*
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WernoZaur Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
umummm *dusi się*
ależ nie ma za co :hug:
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KanaeYamashi Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Are you inspired Elfen Lied?
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no, I hared about it but never seen it.
i created this chara long time ago for half game master character for friends RPG system
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Mesunari Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist
o kurde, jaka piękna *_* zdecydowanie, uwielbiam Twoją postac <33333
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuje :hug:
Ciesze się, ze Ci się podoba... <3<3<3
Po sześciu podejściach skończyłam ja w końcu Q_Q"
teraz muszę skończyć jej... umm... no nie powiem, ze partnera ...ale... hmm... towarzysza (?) no i art trade dla Ciebie robic :D
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Mesunari Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist
spoko, nie spiesz sie :D
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Czekam na wenę :D
Ja Tobie parkę i ty tez mi parkę,ok?
Ale skocze partnera byś wiedziała kogo rysować xD
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Mesunari Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist
okej, nie ma sprawy ^^
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AssassinsGeass Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Genialnie Ci wyszła, ma śliczne włoski :)
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuje pięknie xD
Włosy to mi cudem wyszły, bo zazwyczaj zwalam materiały i włosy Q_Q"
(już nie mówiąc o tle *cough*)
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks very good for being born of a half-dead goddess. ^_^ Was Freyja jealous? ;)
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Yoruni Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, but I don't think that "alive" part of Hel as ugly ;)
...and yes that's correct, Freya cursed her 'cause of that.
Niya was risen from the start on Asgard but she felt there a bit hated, after Freya cursed her Niya run away to her mother place.
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, fascinating. =) Need/want a mostly fair critic? ^_^
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